What do you guys think of this hair line design for my hair transplant? Would you change anything?

[kvirdi10]

Hi all, I am getting a hair transplant this year and this is what the Doctor drew up quickly during the consult. I have traction alopecia in my hairline and just want it restored to my original hairline. If you look closely you can see the hairs from my original hairline still intact.

Any thoughts on the hairline and temple points?